2011年6月23日星期四

A05 In Progress



11 评论:

graphicdesignchic2011 说...

The first image is interesting with the different colors for the pills. I think this could prove to be an interesting series.

Ellina Marie Stein 说...

I love the idea/concept of the last photo of the bear. The photoshop is a little rough around the edge of the bear so maybe clean that up. I htink you could take that further and make a series to and depth to the story.

The second photo is also interesting how the pills are on the comic and it seems lke the comic is stressing you out as you make it. I like sarah's ideas too!

K8Sez 说...

I really like the vibrant colors in the first one. They are really brilliant against the sterile white backdrop. The last one is also really cute and tells a nice narrative.

Natalie Sitko 说...

I love the first one with the different colored pills.. I like how there are so many pills that are missing... creating a narrative around this scene would be really strong

Melissa Harless 说...

I really like the narrative that is formed in the first two images. I like the colors, lighting, and contrast of the first two images.

I think the third picture goes along with your stuffed animal/narrative theme that you were talking about for your final.

taylorvarner 说...

I really like the photos with the pills. I think they are a great starting point and it would be cool to see more, maybe more shapes and colors in them too. good job!

jessie.cora 说...

These are interesting...I like the ones with the pills but I think they could use a little more context. Maybe by showing more of the space. I think the one with the comics is stronger.

Allie Ulnick 说...

I love the second one a lot!
I love the background against the pills.
I appreciate the colors in the first one as well. The first two are definitely my favorite and I love that it is almost like a narrative to me at least. Keep going with the pill idea I think you could get some really strong photos out of those that portray a lot and represent even more.

sarahjaneb 说...

perhaps having the comic drawing interact with the pills would be interesting. the camera angle for the last image is unique. the lighting seems to work for a stage. i think you might consider keeping the entire image in color???

Ms. Manciu 说...

Great lighting, color, focus, and perspective! I like it all!

LuDuh 说...

I love the colors you capture with the pills great framing in those. You have a great start with these.
The second one is great also I would love to see more of these as well.

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